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Wigber
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Poems in the lyric form created by 'el smaugita'
quote:
it is cold
i want spring
i am sulking
end of post
 
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Wigber
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hot coffee
more in pot
itchy, twitchy
addiction

if this is a new form ("no hubris to see here, folks - go about your business"), then I suppose something must be decided about the last line -
  • does it divurge from the main theme?
  • does it carry on the theme from a different perspective?
  • is 'end of post' the only acceptable line?

And generally, are the syllables the thing, or the word count?

You dirty bastard
I waited for
that parking space
christmas. bah humbug
 
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Wigber
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quote:
Originally posted by Maeve:
Pity me
for I must
go to the mall
don't want to...
 
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drat, duncan beat me to it!





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Wigber
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quote:
Originally posted by Maeve:
drat, duncan beat me to it!

Sorry Maeve
just padding
my thread count
tra la la
 
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*pokes padding*
feels squishy
want to do again
Tee Hee


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Sayonara wa mata au toki no yakusoku

 
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bwhahahahaha!

i was a poet and i didn't knowit!

Big Grin


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when's spring due?.
 
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Did the mall.
Now exhausted.
No more shopping!
It's Nap Time!





I would have thought the end of the world is everyone's responsibility, wouldn't you? ~Death in Thief of Time


Minister of Kraftwerk in the Realm of U & P, Order of the Pineapple with frond for advancement in Nap studies.
 
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Wigber
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5:15
already dark
Solstice Demons!
*hugs garlic*
 
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have leftover
roast pork and
stuffing sandwich
for lunch Big Grin


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why do people
call me for help
and not know
what they're calling for?


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Jesus was a community organizer.


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*knocks on the table because he's too cool to clap*

*orders another Yoo-Hoo*


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stuck in limbo...read my profile to confuse yourself more
 
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I must bake.
I must pack
California
Here I come!





I would have thought the end of the world is everyone's responsibility, wouldn't you? ~Death in Thief of Time


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short-sleeved shirt
fingers cold
three-foot-thick wall
no insulation



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too much eating
chocolate in office
don't need lunch
end of post.


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Limertilly: A pagan deity forgotten by man and therefore banished to the realms of memory and darkness now remembered by a young girl in downtown L.A. in the form of a dream and therefore freed to reap your revenge on the people who discarded you, thereby forcing said girl to learn to use her innate yet awesome powers as a soothsayer to gather forces of the Earth to defy you and once more banish you to your cold, cold prisoooooon
 
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Big Grin Big Grin



cookie dough
chocolate brownie
phish food
in three days



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I never really lost my virginity... it just sort of eventually wore off - Chris Addison
Um... I'm thinking that a lot of my internal conflict and malaise comes from the tension between the life I ACTUALLY want to live, and the stories I'd love to be able to tell? - T-Rex, qwantz.com
 
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Wigber
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quote:
Originally posted by Royko:

But, you see -
1000 words;
a few beats
too many
 
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