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I come up with a few pieces ever so often.

This was one I wrote almost 2 years back when a friend asked for something about stars.

Seeing that we're counting down to the opening of you know what, I thought it appropriate to bring it out of the closet again. One of the few non-melancholic and the first triolet:

Hope you guys enjoy it and pardon the amateur!

To see the stars in dark of night
is like a life shared - good and kind.
If you would, turn down the lights
to see the stars in dark of night.
Though there're times when these flare bright
and set us up all dazed and blind,
to see the stars in dark of night
is like a life shared - good and kind.


When Nature calls, we answer. Or else. ~ Me
 
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I love that this board has members that are willing to share their own creative natures.

That was beautiful, Albene. Thank you.


My heart ruptured in a thousand ways
That day
Hemorrhaging sorrows
Countless ways of tearing me apart
Chambers of inadequacy glowing
Showing, my flaws
In tormenting cruel lights

porcelain interior

There once was a doll who was stuck in the wall.
I cut her head off at nightfall.
Now my dolly is dead.
Chillingly, killingly, thrillingly
Dead
Maybe, I should have cut off her arms instead.

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